Writing: Identifying Sentence Errors
The following sentence
contains either a single error or no error at all. If the sentence contains an
error, select the one underlined part that must be changed to make the sentence
correct. If the sentence contains no error, select choice E.
Read
the entire original sentence to yourself, listening for errors. Quickly check the underlined portions of the
sentence against the Big 8 Grammar Rules.
Identify and mark any error you find, but look at all of the choices before
selecting your answer.
An abundant supply of milk from dairy farms nearby make the Bern region of Switzerland a leading producer of condensed milk and milk chocolate. No error
(A) The word “an” is the correct article to use
when the following word begins with a vowel.
There is no error here.
(B) The word “from” is the
idiomatically correct preposition to explain the origin of something. There is no error here.
(C) This is the first verb
in the sentence. Whenever a verb is
underlined, check to make sure that it matches the subject. Remember, the subject of the sentence cannot
be part of a prepositional phrase such as “of milk” or “from dairy farms
nearby.” That leaves only one noun: “supply.” Would you say “an abundant supply make?” No! “An
abundant supply makes” is correct. Mark
this error and quickly check the remaining answer choices.
(D) Check the article first. “A” is correct because the sentence is
talking about one specific place as a producer.
The word “leading” is a modifier that tells you that this place doesn’t
just produce things, it produces them well and is among the best places to do
so. The modifier “leading” is as close as possible to the word it modifies, “producer,” so there is no error here.
(E) This choice cannot be
correct because you already identified an error.
The correct answer is (C).
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