Writing: Identifying Sentence Errors
The following sentence
contains either a single error or no error at all. If the sentence contains an
error, select the one underlined part that must be changed to make the sentence
correct. If the sentence contains no error, select choice E.
Read the entire sentence to
yourself, listening for errors. Then
quickly check each of the underlined portions against the Big 8 Grammar
Rules.
The Sundance Film Festival, which is located in Park City, Utah, and was founded by actor and director Robert Redford, have introduced audiences to some of the most acclaimed and popular independent films of the last thirty years. No error.
(A) This underlined portion tests whether you know the
difference between “which” and “that.”
The word “which” must come after a comma because the following
information is not essential to the sentence.
The word “that” needs no comma because the following information is
vital to the sentence. This sentence
requires the word “which.” Also, notice
that the festival is singular so the verb “is” is correct. There is no error here.
(B) Whenever you see a tense change, make sure
that it is necessary. This sentence
changes from “is located” to “was founded.” It does not make sense to say “is founded” because a festival
can only be founded once; it is not an ongoing process but an event that
happened in the past. The change is
correct. There is no error here.
(C) This underlined portion says “have
introduced.” Whenever you have a verb
separated from its subject, be especially careful to make sure that the subject
and verb match. You already noted that
the film festival is singular, so would it make sense to write, “the festival
have introduced?” No. You need the word “has.” Mark this error and quickly look at your
other choices.
(D) The word “most” modifies the word “acclaimed”
and is placed as close as possible to the word it modifies. Notice that the word “most” is appropriate
rather than the word “more” because this sentence is comparing all of the films of the
last thirty years. One thing is “more
acclaimed” than another if you are comparing only two things. There is no error here.
(E) This cannot be the answer because you already
found an error.
The correct answer is (C).
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